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== 1st Granite, 1055 ==
 
== 1st Granite, 1055 ==
  
The spring always brings changes, and I'm one of 'em.  I guess they figured it was time for a bit of military discipline -- with the new year, I was asked by the populace to take control over more than just the grunts.  So be it.  I hope they know what they're gettin' in to.
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The spring always brings change, and I'm one of 'em.  I guess they figured it was time for a bit of military discipline -- with the new year, I was asked by the populace to take control over more than just the grunts.  So be it.  I hope they know what they're gettin' in to.
  
 
Certainly first things be first.  I've been noticing a whole lotta partyin' goin' on while I've been in charge, mostly at this "sculpture garden" they all so love to crowd around in.  Didn't matter to me before, 'cause I wasn't in charge of the lot of 'em.  That's changed, and so does this.  I told 'em all to bugger on back to work, because this wasn't a party hole anymore.  In case they hadn't noticed the obsidian towers encrusted with rough goblins, we ain't exactly in a sort of peacetime here to screw around.  They can take breaks and make parties when we aren't in risk of bein' overrun by greenskins.
 
Certainly first things be first.  I've been noticing a whole lotta partyin' goin' on while I've been in charge, mostly at this "sculpture garden" they all so love to crowd around in.  Didn't matter to me before, 'cause I wasn't in charge of the lot of 'em.  That's changed, and so does this.  I told 'em all to bugger on back to work, because this wasn't a party hole anymore.  In case they hadn't noticed the obsidian towers encrusted with rough goblins, we ain't exactly in a sort of peacetime here to screw around.  They can take breaks and make parties when we aren't in risk of bein' overrun by greenskins.
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Nothing much to speak of in the transaction, we got ourselves some solid supplies in exchange for the useless rock things our craftsdwarves are so fond of making.  Stopping by the trade depot, a jovial pot-bellied human tried to offer me something for my wife, a lass of fictional existence.
 
Nothing much to speak of in the transaction, we got ourselves some solid supplies in exchange for the useless rock things our craftsdwarves are so fond of making.  Stopping by the trade depot, a jovial pot-bellied human tried to offer me something for my wife, a lass of fictional existence.
  
[[Image:Rhoe_Menacingquartz.JPG]]
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[[Image:Rhoe_menacingquartz.JPG]]
  
The stupidest thing I've ever seen crafted, but I can't imagine this fortress will fail to one-up me on that front.
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The stupidest thing I've ever seen crafted.  A gem menacing with spikes of gems and gems.
  
 
Roman, flush with the success of trading with the tall folk, offered me some rock-things for my pants.
 
Roman, flush with the success of trading with the tall folk, offered me some rock-things for my pants.
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It's done.
 
It's done.
  
The sappin's complete, the tenuous supports all set up to drop.  In ceremony, I assigned Roman the last thing to do.
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The sappin's complete, the tenuous supports all set up to drop.  I assigned Roman in ceremony the last thing to do.
  
[[Image:Rhoe_Pullthelever.JPG]]
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[[Image:Rhoe_pullthelever.JPG]]
  
 
With a flourish, he pulled the lever.
 
With a flourish, he pulled the lever.
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Shrugging, I helped.  Or tried.  I saw what he was talking about.  "Alright, hold it, back up.  Let's give it a proper tackle on three.  One, two... three!"
 
Shrugging, I helped.  Or tried.  I saw what he was talking about.  "Alright, hold it, back up.  Let's give it a proper tackle on three.  One, two... three!"
  
Throwing ourselves at it, we pounded it with our full weight.  Slowly, the rock salt gave under our combined might.
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Throwing ourselves at it, we pounded it with our full weight.  Slowly, the rock salt gave under our combined might. Suddenly, it slid into position, our impetus throwing us on the grass.
 
 
Suddenly, it slid into position, our momentum slamming us into the dirt.
 
  
 
A titan crushed us to the ground with its mighty foot, flattening grass and trees, rolling stones.  For a good thirty seconds, all I heard was the tinny ring of my own ears, blinded by the concussion.  Slowly, my senses returning, I got to my feet, lending Roman a hand.  We looked on our handiwork.
 
A titan crushed us to the ground with its mighty foot, flattening grass and trees, rolling stones.  For a good thirty seconds, all I heard was the tinny ring of my own ears, blinded by the concussion.  Slowly, my senses returning, I got to my feet, lending Roman a hand.  We looked on our handiwork.
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A battlement rolled off the top of the tower's fortifications, slamming to the ground below.  Another followed it.  A chunk of obsidian split from the side of the goblin fortress and fell.  More followed their brethren.
 
A battlement rolled off the top of the tower's fortifications, slamming to the ground below.  Another followed it.  A chunk of obsidian split from the side of the goblin fortress and fell.  More followed their brethren.
  
[[Image:Rhoe_Breakdown.JPG]]
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[[Image:Rhoe_breakdown.JPG]]
  
 
Triumph.
 
Triumph.
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Fine.  I gave him Roman, who worked on a few fine carvings.
 
Fine.  I gave him Roman, who worked on a few fine carvings.
  
The mayor never spoke to me again.  Relieving, but unnerving; his silence was unclear to me until I actually saw the engravings.
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The mayor never spoke to me again.  Relieving, but unnerving; the reasoning was unclear to me until I actually saw the engravings.
  
 
A giant spider striking down a dwarf.
 
A giant spider striking down a dwarf.
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It was time to test the new bunker I had installed on the island amidst the chasms.
 
It was time to test the new bunker I had installed on the island amidst the chasms.
  
[[Image:Rhoe_Completedbunker.JPG]]
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[[Image:Rhoe_completedbunker.JPG]]
  
 
Yelling at the marksmen to get to the bunker, we charged up the bridge across the chasm and set ourselves into position, the thundering footsteps of the titan fast approaching.  Setting my ammo in place, I looked up through the fortifications to find Meng, a member of my squad, had misinterpreted my orders.
 
Yelling at the marksmen to get to the bunker, we charged up the bridge across the chasm and set ourselves into position, the thundering footsteps of the titan fast approaching.  Setting my ammo in place, I looked up through the fortifications to find Meng, a member of my squad, had misinterpreted my orders.
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Wrenching the missiles out of its flesh, it folded its hands into a double-fist and pounded her into the limestone road.
 
Wrenching the missiles out of its flesh, it folded its hands into a double-fist and pounded her into the limestone road.
  
Struck dumb by her death, we mutely launched our own salvos.  Unfortunately, the fortifications were poorly constructed, and we could get shots only at its feet, and poor ones at that.  It stormed onwards, its back to us, toward the trade depot.  Bem bellowed, its bloody fists raised high, before a single bolt pierced its chest, just to the left of its sternum.
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Struck dumb by her death, we mutely launched our own salvos.  Unfortunately, the fortifications were poorly constructed, and we could get shots only at its feet, and poor ones at that.  It bellowed, its bloody fists raised high, before a single bolt pierced its chest, just to the left of its sternum.
  
The civilian hunter had thrown himself into battle from atop the trade depot, and his first shot was a perfect one.  Its heart cut through, the titan's bellows turned to shrill, garbled screams.  It stumbled towards the depot, blood on its mind; but the river of life fluid pouring down its chest was not inclined to cooperate.  It fell to its knees, a weak cry of defiance escaping its lips before imprinting its dead body on the sand.
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The civilian hunter had thrown himself into battle from atop the trade depot, and his first shot was a perfect one.  Its heart cut through, the titan's bellows turned to shrill, garbled screams.  It stumbled towards the depot, blood on its mind; but the river of life fluid pouring down its chest was not inclined to cooperate.  It fell to its knees, a weak cry of defiance escaping its lips before its torso followed its knees, imprinting its dead body on the sand.
  
 
Standing down, we hauled Meng's crumpled body to the graveyard for a warrior's burial.
 
Standing down, we hauled Meng's crumpled body to the graveyard for a warrior's burial.
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Rhoegund Wheelbrews, signing off.
 
Rhoegund Wheelbrews, signing off.
 
[[Category:Bloodline games|Tinbolt]]
 

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