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Shrugging, I helped.  Or tried.  I saw what he was talking about.  "Alright, hold it, back up.  Let's give it a proper tackle on three.  One, two... three!"
 
Shrugging, I helped.  Or tried.  I saw what he was talking about.  "Alright, hold it, back up.  Let's give it a proper tackle on three.  One, two... three!"
  
Throwing ourselves at it, we pounded it with our full weight.  Slowly, the rock salt gave under our combined might.
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Throwing ourselves at it, we pounded it with our full weight.  Slowly, the rock salt gave under our combined might. Suddenly, it slid into position, our impetus throwing us on the grass.
 
 
Suddenly, it slid into position, our momentum slamming us into the dirt.
 
  
 
A titan crushed us to the ground with its mighty foot, flattening grass and trees, rolling stones.  For a good thirty seconds, all I heard was the tinny ring of my own ears, blinded by the concussion.  Slowly, my senses returning, I got to my feet, lending Roman a hand.  We looked on our handiwork.
 
A titan crushed us to the ground with its mighty foot, flattening grass and trees, rolling stones.  For a good thirty seconds, all I heard was the tinny ring of my own ears, blinded by the concussion.  Slowly, my senses returning, I got to my feet, lending Roman a hand.  We looked on our handiwork.

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