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− | === Epigraph: ===
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− | Will be done in the end, IF it's worthwhile.
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| === Preface: === | | === Preface: === |
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− | I have an idea for a DF-inspired work of fiction. DF is un on it's own, but it's when we get to telling stories about what we've seen and done that things really get entertaining. Most of us got pulled in by the stories of Boatmurdered, and that was done in an OLD version of the game!But I believe we can do better. Pretty much all of the DF witing I've read is either D for Dwarf content on the wiki, or written from the perspective of the player, frequently as the "leader" of the fortress. I want to do something different. I want to explore, from a first-person perspective, the lives of the dwarves, in close detail. What's it like for seven-year-old Medtobonul, wandering stone halls and observing statues of his grandparents being eviscerated by demons? I don't want there to be a single narrative, that would just be too isolated, it wouldn't really give the full scope impression of all the life in a given fortress. Rather, there shall be many narratives. Bits and scraps, lik bitof old jounals, engravings on walls... Sort of like ghosts or memories of somthing huge, something grand. Something deeper than just a simple (and violent) game. I want to tell storis about the down time, the (currently) non-existent barroom conversations, the travelling, the politics... Not just the horrible accidents. | + | I have an idea for a DF-inspired work of fiction. DF is fun on it's own, but it's when we get to telling stories about what we've seen and done that things really get entertaining. Most of us got pulled in by the stories of Boatmurdered, and that was done in an OLD version of the game! But I believe we can do better. Pretty much all of the DF writing I've read is either D for Dwarf content on the wiki, or written from the perspective of the player, frequently as the "leader" of the fortress. I want to do something different. I want to explore, from a first-person perspective, the lives of the dwarves, in close detail. What's it like for seven-year-old Medtobonul, wandering stone halls and observing statues of his grandparents being eviscerated by demons? I don't want there to be a single narrative, that would just be too isolated, it wouldn't really give the full scope impression of all the life in a given fortress. Rather, there shall be many narratives. Bits and scraps, like bits of old journals, engravings on walls... Sort of like ghosts or memories of something huge, something grand. Something deeper than just a simple (and violent) game. I want to tell stories about the down time, the (currently) non-existent barroom conversations, the travelling, the politics... Not just the horrible accidents. |
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− | === Introduction: ===
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− | This section contains raw data, copied directly from the game. It is the raw information, kept as notes, to be used for the creation of the story. In time, I'll get a drawing for every character in the fortress.
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− | '''World Size:''' Large <br>
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− | '''History:''' Very Long <br>
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− | '''Number of Civilizations:''' Very High <br>
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− | '''Maximum Number of Sites:''' Very High <br>
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− | '''Number of Beasts:''' Very High <br>
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− | '''Natural Savagery:''' Very High<br>
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− | '''Time Taken:''' 11:11 AM to 11:34 (23 minutes) <br>
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− | '''Rejected:''' 30
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− | '''The Product:'''
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− | '''World:''' Sil Gomath, "The Plane of Legends"<br>
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− | '''Year:''' 1,050<br>
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− | '''Hist Figs:''' 206,114<br>
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− | '''Dead:''' 196,504<br>
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− | '''Events:''' 1,411,175
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− | [[Image:World_map-region2-1050--10081.gif|Thumb|200px]]
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− | '''Local Civs:'''<br>
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− | Dwarves<br>
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− | Goblins (War)<br>
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− | Humans
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− | '''Dwarven Civilizations:'''<br>
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− | The Earthen Floor<br>
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− | The Famous Standard<br>
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− | The Rumored Knife<br>
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− | The Tomes of Air<br>
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− | The Moral Stockade<br>
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− | The Elder Fortress '''(Parent)'''<br>
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− | The Considerate Trumpets<br>
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− | The Future Hames<br>
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− | The Radiant Vessel<br>
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− | The Wall of Defending<br>
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− | The Wires of Covering<br>
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− | The Scorching Fence<br>
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− | The Books of Morning<br>
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− | The Tools of Searching
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− | '''Region:''' The Willful Hills<br>
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− | '''Embark Site:''' 5x5
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− | '''Temparate Shrubland'''<br>
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− | '''Temparature:''' Warm<br>
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− | '''Trees:''' Woodland<br>
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− | '''Other Vegetation:''' Moderate<br>
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− | '''Surroundings:''' Untamed Wilds
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− | '''Stream:''' Balanceslings the Doomed Side<br>
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− | '''Strata:'''<br>
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− | Silt<br>
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− | Silt Loam<br>
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− | Sandy Clay<br>
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− | Clay<br>
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− | Rock Salt<br>
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− | Schist<br>
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− | Gabbro<br>
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− | Quartzite
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− | '''Group:''' The Arch of Whispering
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− | '''Fortress:''' Rodimled, "Wadedracks"
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− | '''Starting Stocks:'''<br>
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− | 2 dogs<br>
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− | 1 war dog<br>
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− | 1 hunting dog<br>
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− | 2 copper picks<br>
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− | 1 copper batle axe<br>
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− | 1 iron anvil<br>
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− | 20 dwarven beer<br>
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− | 20 dwarven wine<br>
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− | 20 dwarven ale<br>
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− | 5 plump helmet spawn<br>
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− | 5 pig tal seeds<br>
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− | 5 cave wheat seeds<br>
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− | 5 sweet pod seeds<br>
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− | 4 rock nuts<br>
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− | 5 dimple cup spawn<br>
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− | 15 pond grabber meat<br>
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− | 15 cave fish<br>
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− | 15 plump helmets<br>
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− | 5 pig tail fiber thread<br>
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− | 5 pig tail fiber cloth<br>
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− | 5 pig tail fiber bags<br>
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− | 3 pig tal fiber ropes<br>
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− | 3 fox leather quivers<br>
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− | 3 oaken buckets<br>
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− | 3 oaken splints<br>
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− | 3 oaken crutches<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Amkinastesh, "Gladnesscudgels"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 81<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Male<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Dubious of Usen the Morality of Nourishment<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | His hair is quite sparse. His very long sideburns are neatly combed. His very long moustache is aranged in double braids. His very long beard is neatly combed. He has very low cheekbones, and he has a deeply recessed round chin. His somewhat tall, small-lobed ears are very flattened. e is average in size. His somewhat short nose is incredibly upturned. His somewhat short head is somewhat narrow. His cinnamon skin is slightly wrinkled. His hair is ecru with a touch of gray. His eyes are ochre.<br>
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− | '''Personality:'''<br>
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− | He is slow to anger. He is comfortable in soial situation. He is very friendly. He isn't given to flights of fancy. He does not have a great aesthetic sensitivity. He prefers familiar routines. He is candid and sincere in dealing with others. He lacks confidence. He is very disorganized. He rarely does more work than necessary. He inhales sharply when he is angry. He often snaps his fingers when he's bored.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:'''<br>
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− | + He is almost never sick <br>
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− | + and very slow to tire.<br>
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− | + He has very good intuition,<br>
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− | + a natural inclination toward language,<br>
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− | + a sum of patience<br>
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− | + and a good spacial sense.<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:'''<br>
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− | - He is flimsy<br>
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− | - He has a meager ability with social rlationships,<br>
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− | - poor analytical abilities and<br>
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− | - a large deficite of willpower.<br>
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− | '''Preferences:'''<br>
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− | Amkinastesh likes Diorite, trifle pewter, fire agate, oak wood, flounder bone, caps, scepters and horses for their strength. When possible, he prefers to consume bat, ray and longland beer. He absolutely detests lizards.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficient Miner<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Ishkilrud, "Barbronze"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 54<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Male<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Dubious of Usen the Morality of Nourishment<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | His hair is quite sparse. His very long sideburns are neatly combed. His very long moustache is arranged in double braids. His short hair is neatly combed. He is muscular. His somewhat tall ears have great swinging lobes. He has very high cheekbones, and he has a very round chin. His somewhat short nose is incredibly upturned. His somewhat short head is somwhat narrow. His teeth are crowded. He has a low voice. His hair is black. His skin is cinnamon. His eyes are amethyst.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | Hei very friendly. He is unassertive. He is rarely happy or enthusiastic. He prefers familiar routines. He is candid and sincere in dealings with others. He finds helping others rewarding. He is organized. He strives for excellence. He acts impulsively. He begins to talk much more slowly when he's exasperated. When he's thinking, his body becomes very still.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + He is strong and<br>
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− | + slow to tire.<br>
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− | + He has great creativity<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - He is flimsy<br>
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− | - he has poor focus,<br>
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− | - an iffy sense for music<br>
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− | - and a meager ability with social relationships<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Ishkilrud likes bituminous coal, billon, red tourmaline, bolts, scepters and glasseye for their coloration. When possible, he prfers to consume lungfish, dwarven rum, whip vine flour and sliver barb seeds. He absolutely detests cave spiders.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Prficient Miner<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Rakustlor, "Tombstools"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 79<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Male<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Casual of Kesh Windyfish the Tundra of Mornings<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | He is very skinny. His sideburns are clean-shaven. His very long moustache is neatly combed. Hi ver long har is neatly combed. His incredibly close-set eyes are bulging. His somewhat short nose is incredibly upturned. His slightly flattened ears are smewhat tall. He has high cheekbones. His teeth are crowded. His cinnamon skin islightly wrinkled.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | He hase a calm demeanor. He is quick to anger. He is comfortable in socia situations. He is often cheerful. He has a fertile imagination. He does not have a great aesthetic sensitivity. He is incredibly frank and candid in dealings with others. He doesn't like to compromise with others. He doesn't go out of his way to work more than necessary. He possesses great willpower. He oten bites his nails when he's trying to rememer smething.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + He is quite quick to heal<br>
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− | + He has an iron will,<br>
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− | + great creativity,<br>
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− | + a sum of patience<br>
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− | + and a feel for music<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - He has a meager ability with social relationships<br>
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− | - Poor empathy<br>
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− | - and poor analytical abilities<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Rakustlor likes rutile, bismuth, yellow jasper, fungiwood, white-handed gibbon bone, backpaks, cages, scepters, donkeys for their stubbornness and demon rats for their diabolical hunger for the food of others. When possible, he prfers to consume giat cave swallow, cave fis and gutter cruor. He absolutely detests lizards.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficient Woodcutter<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Rithum, "Bellnail"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 58<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Female<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Dubious of Tath<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | She is incredibly muscular. Her larg-irised wide-set amethyst eyes are bulging. Her somewhat short nose is incredibly upturned. Her hair is clean-shaven. Her omewhat broad ears are flattened. Her skin is cinnamon.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | She often feels discouraged. She is somewhat reserved. She is candid and sicere in deaings with others. She is modest. She holds her breath whn he's nervous.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + She is mighty.<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - She is quite susceptibleto disease.<br>
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− | - She has a shortage of patience.<br>
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− | - and littlelinguistic ability.<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Rithum likes ilmenite, iron, red beryl, spore tree wood, the colour pale pink, short swords, floodgates, amulets nd hagfish for their ability to tie themselves into knots. When possible, she prefers to consume banded knifefish, gutter cruor and dwarven wheat flour. She absolutely dtests lizards.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficient Mason<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Melbilthikut, "Tomebooks"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 79<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Male<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Ardent of Rab<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | He is broad yet weak. His hair is quite sparse. His medium-length sideburns are neatly combed. His medium-length moustache is neatly combed.His long beard is neatly combed. His very long hair is natly combed. His very flattened ears have great swinging lobes. His protruding cobalt eyes are very round. His somewhat short nose is incredibly upturned. His somewhat short head is somwhat narrow. He has very high cheekbones. His eyebrows are quite long. His teeth are crowded. His hair is pale chestnut. His cinnamon skin is slightly wrinkled.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | He occasionally overindulges. He is confident under pressure. He is unassertive. He likes to try new things. He admires tradition. He is guarded in relationships with others. He doesn't like to compromise with others. He is occasionally given to procrastination. He takes time when making decisions.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + He has good intuition.<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - He is quick to tire<br>
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− | - very weak<br>
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− | - poor creativity<br>
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− | - and alarge deficit of willpower.<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Belbilthikut likes native platinum, billon, sard, the clour pine green, stars, shields and larg, serrated discs. When possible, he prefers to consume longland beer. He asolutely detests large roaches.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficient Planter<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Thedakmorul, "Clanpage"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 87<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Male<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Dubious of Tath<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | His sideburns are clean-shaven. His very long mustache is neatly combed. His very long beard is natly combed. His very long hair is arranged in double braids. He has a recessed round chin. He is average in size. Hissomewhat short nos is incredibly upturned. He has a grating, raspy voice. His somewhat broad ears are somewhat tall. His emerald eyes have large irises. His cinnamon skin is wrinkled.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | He often feels discouraged. He is rarely happy or enthusiastic. He is self-disciplined. He runs his fingers through his hair when he's annoyed.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + Very rarely sick<br>
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− | + slow to tire<br>
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− | + Very good focus<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - Flimsy<br>
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− | - quite clumsy<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Thedakmorul likes slate, bronze, ruby, amber, the colour orange, waves, warhammers, bracelets and magma men for their flowng movement. Whn possible, he prefers to consume white-spotted puffer and fisher berry wine. He absolutely detests worms.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficient Brewer<br>
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− | '''Name:''' Olindeleth, "Tongspolish"<br>
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− | '''Age:''' 72<br>
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− | '''Gender:''' Female<br>
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− | '''Religion:''' Faithful of Etur<br>
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− | '''Appearance:''' <br>
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− | She is scrawny. Her hair is quite sparse. Her very long hair is neatly combed. She has high cheekbones, and a recessed chin. Her somewhat shot nose is incredibly upturned. Her ears are somewhat tall. Her somewhat short head is omewht narrow. Her eyebrows are quite long. She has a low voice. Her hair is chestnut. Her skin is cinnamon.<br>
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− | '''Personality:''' <br>
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− | Sh rarely feels discouraged. She occasionally overindulges. She is somewhat reserved. She is very energetic and active. Sh isn't given to flights of fancy. She is candid and sincere in dalings with others. She is truly fulfilled by assisting those in need. She doesn't like to compromisewith others. She has a sense of duty. She doesn't go out of her way to do more work than is necessary.<br>
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− | '''Strengths:''' <br>
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− | + She has a good feel for social rltionships<br>
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− | '''Weaknesses:''' <br>
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− | - She is clumsy<br>
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− | - flimsy<br>
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− | - weak<br>
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− | - very quick to tire<br>
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− | - shortage of patience<br>
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− | - poor analytical abilities<br>
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− | - poor creativity<br>
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− | '''Preferences:''' <br>
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− | Olindeleth likes selenite, lead, tanzanite, amber, the colour cardinal, bolts and red-winged blackbirds for their colouration. When possible, she prefers to consume bloated tubers, prickle berry wine and mog juice. She absolutely detests fire snakes.<br>
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− | '''Skills:'''<br>
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− | ! Proficiet Carpenter<br>
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− | === Year One ===
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− | === Epilogue: ===
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− | This will be done when it's all finished.
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− | == Wiki Stuff ==
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− | {{L|Glass Industry|Glass Industry Flowchart}} designed to replace the old one. Though it was a masterpiece of wiki-magic, it wasn't particularly in-depth, was a little vague, had a couple of inaccurate points, and kept breaking whenever anything changed. Thus, the logical solution is to replace it with a more comprehensive flowchart in the form of an image. Sadly, it's a little too literal, a little too... Blunt. It comes across as somewhat disorienting and menacing. It's a lot of tiny little things to look at, in order to fully interpret the whole... It reads like a schematic diagram of some ornate machine. If you have any ideas on how to make it appear friendlier, or read easier, please say something! I'd love to discuss it with you!
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− | [[Image:Glassflow.png|Thumb|200px]]
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− | And a friendlier version for those of you who prefer to not be intimidated by blank white space.
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