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Difference between revisions of "40d Talk:Defense guide"

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::A megabeast appears alone, with an alert message that mentions the beast by name. These creature are quite powerful. Approach with caution.</i>
 
::A megabeast appears alone, with an alert message that mentions the beast by name. These creature are quite powerful. Approach with caution.</i>
 
Wow! That's helpful!
 
Wow! That's helpful!
<br>Also: no pictures to break up the text; The entire "civilians" section could be replaced by a link to [[Help! My civilians keep running into combat!]]; Etc.; etc. --[[User:Juckto|Juckto]] 19:25, 8 November 2008 (EST)
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I would say that this article could be more of an index page, there are plenty of other articles that have been written on each aspect. The article itself should focus on:
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*Fortress design (link to [[Fortress defense]])
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*Dwarf behaviour (link to [[Help! My civilians keep running into combat!]])
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*Traps and using traps
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*Military (link to [[Military]])
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*Hostile creatures
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*Aftermath (cleaning up)
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--[[User:Juckto|Juckto]] 19:25, 8 November 2008 (EST)

Revision as of 00:35, 9 November 2008

Could do with a rewrite

Looking this over quickly, it seems pretty crap. Too many headings, too little info. e.g.

# 2.8 Megabeasts
A megabeast appears alone, with an alert message that mentions the beast by name. These creature are quite powerful. Approach with caution.

Wow! That's helpful!

I would say that this article could be more of an index page, there are plenty of other articles that have been written on each aspect. The article itself should focus on:

--Juckto 19:25, 8 November 2008 (EST)