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Difference between revisions of "40d Talk:Defense guide"

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:: This seems pretty thorough at the moment, more comprehensive than the [[Siege]] page. --[[User:Jellyfishgreen|Jellyfishgreen]] 15:31, 1 January 2009 (EST)

Revision as of 20:31, 1 January 2009

Could do with a rewrite

Looking this over quickly, it seems pretty crap. Too many headings, too little info. e.g.

# 2.8 Megabeasts
A megabeast appears alone, with an alert message that mentions the beast by name. These creature are quite powerful. Approach with caution.

Wow! That's helpful!

I would say that this article could be more of an index page, there are plenty of other articles that have been written on each aspect. The article itself should focus on:

--Juckto 19:25, 8 November 2008 (EST)

This seems pretty thorough at the moment, more comprehensive than the Siege page. --Jellyfishgreen 15:31, 1 January 2009 (EST)